Happy Endings

This was a really clever and entertaining read. I don't think I've ever read something like this and the text itself was enjoyable as well. Ironically, the ending was good and impactful. I've always agreed to a certain extent that beggings are more fun than endings, but probably because I find it much easier (and more enjoyable) to write them. This was a fun and unique read.


I think another good ending for this would be as follows;
One day at the sk8 park, Mary pulls off a double flip, and John watches in awe. He has been watching her sk8 4 4 months now, and he is still impressed with her grace and ease while sk8ing. Mary has noticed John, and while she is creeped out by him so much, she really likes a boy that can sk8. But she really likes Fred, who is really gnar with a board and can pull off a triple mctwisty while sk8ing, plus he is good looking. Eventually, Fred and Mary start to date, and they eventually move in together when they are both 15 (they don't live with their parents because they quit school at the age of 9 to become professional freestyle boarders. They don't make money, yet whenever another boarder has a sk8 party, they invite all the other boarders in the area to come crash in their place while the party is happening. Fred and Mary went to one of these peoples houses and haven't left. The sk8er who owns the house hasn't noticed yet. He never hears them because he has intense death-metal playing really loud the whole time.). Eventually, Fred and Mary get married, and live happily in the sk8ers house for two more years, until they are noticed. They then live in a sk8 park, along with John. Seeing Mary happily married gets him upset, so he decides to attempt a killer trick to win her back. He can't complete it and he dies. Having no food, Fred and Mary have to eat the meat off his bones to survive the next couple of months.

Never stop sk8ing,
Sk8erboy1234